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Please do not try anything you read here without serious consideration to safety. This is a work of fiction. Some characters are designed to show the unsavory side of submission. It is a story meant to induce discussion and hopefully arouse your interest. Nothing more than entertainment.

Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Writing Chapter 8 (day 4)

I am really disappointed because I have been looking forward to this part of the story since I thought of the idea, but something is not right.  I figured out one of my problems and tried to correct it but it just does not feel right.  It is like there is a piece missing or the character is not right.  I am really struggling trying to write this chapter and I am even hesitant to post it once it is done.  I think I am going to have to go back and redo this chapter when I get it clearer in my head.  I did take a break to get away from it and I was able to get some pictures that might help me in the later chapters of the story.
 
 
I liked the look of this, but I am not sure if I can use it
anywhere since my  guard stands are on the beach.
 

 
Just taken because it was pretty and might be an inspiration.
 

 
Possible idea for the private cove below the Squeeze Inn
 

 
More beach shots
 
 
 
Beach shot with a guard tower in the distance
 

 
I really liked these stairs.  I am not sure why.
(Maybe an idea for the cover)

 
 
Cave from Pirates of the Caribbean
Might be good for the story
 

 

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