Stuggling to finish Chapter 4

I have been reading the 50 Shades trilogy and I am finding that my writing is sounding more and more like her writing.  It is making me hate what I am writing and I feel like I am pulling teeth to get anything out.  At this point I am just trying to get the story down and will go back and re-write later.  I am afraid if I do not keep moving forward the image of the story that I have in my mind will be lost.

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Master Hunter fiddles with the box covered in buttons as it sits on the arm of his chair.  His gaze is distant and Ayden watches him.  Without lowering his gaze to her he asks her to, “Please stand before me.” 

As Ayden clambers to her feet Master Hunter picks up the small box and studies it, deeply caught up in his thoughts.  He takes in a deep breath and sets his resolve, “Now the collar you are wearing is a training collar.”  He looks up at her and she sees something in his eyes, a change in his mood, but she is not sure what it is.  “Some like to set them higher than needed, but you know that I will not hurt you.  Right?”

Ayden’s gaze flits between Master Hunter’s face and the mysterious box in his hand.  She quickly studies the box and raises her hand to touch the delicate metal wrapped around her neck.  She nods and mumbles, “Yes, Master Hunter.”

Master Hunter begins to point to each of the buttons and explain what each one does.  He explains that the lights along the side are indicators for the buttons that are in use and the amount of power being used.  There is a long pause and Ayden waits for him to continue.  When he does continue he tells her that the small box is connected to the collar and that it can make her muscles move.  That he can position her using the box in any way that he wants using a small electrical charge.