This is just a fun attempt at a start of a story for some friends. It is rough and I only started it a couple of days ago, but I do hope that you enjoy the unedited version so far.
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The
sun was beating through the windows and the temperature was rising in the
bedroom already. Aidan rolled over and
looked at the clock on the bedside table which read 8:47. It was going to be unbearably hot again
today, just like every other day this summer since she and Meg had
arrived. Why did she agree to this
summer adventure with Meg? It was her last
summer of freedom before her job started in the fall. It would be her one last chance to spend a
little time with Meg. Meg had been her
best friend growing up in their little hometown and her college roommate. They had decided to rent the little beach
house for the summer before Meg moved off across the country to her new
executive position with a Marketing firm whose name was so long Aidan could
never remember it. They had been at the
beach house a total of five hours when Meg had met an over tanned surfer with a
phony white smile. Since then it seemed Meg
was barely around the bungalow long enough to change her clothes before heading
off for another day at the beach with her surfer, doing whatever it was that
surfers did all day. She glanced over at
Meg’s bed and the covers were just as neat as the day they arrived. Aidan wondered if Meg would ever even use the
bed before summer was over. Aidan
stretched the kinks out of her back and ran her fingers through her long brown
hair. Meg had beautiful blond hair with
just a hint of a curl and all the boys at college had regularly fallen over
themselves to save her a seat at the football games, they all wanted to be near
her and Aidan could not blame them after all Meg was her best friend. Aidan lay there pondering why she was not
more adventurous and outgoing like Meg but slowly rolled herself out of bed and
moved towards the bathroom and a nice cool shower to wake herself up.
She
smiled as she entered the bathroom. It
was almost too cliché even for the beach but at least it was cooler in
here. She and Meg had enjoyed a good
laugh when they first saw it with its light blue paint and lighthouse
tiles. There was even a string of sand
dollars hanging from the mirror like a long forgotten Christmas garland,
probably left over from some other tourists' vacation in the summers before
theirs. They had promised each other
they would look for sand dollars to add to it before they left in the fall. Aidan reached up and gently ran her finger
over the rough edges and realized she missed having Meg around. She turned on the water and it sputtered and
spit but eventually settled into a steady stream of clear water. She slid out of her bra and let her soft
cotton panties drop to the floor and stepped into the water. It danced across her skin and felt
wonderfully cool as she closed her eyes and dropped her head back into the
stream and let it pelt down on her face before it raced over her body and down
the drain, washing the summer’s heat away.
She shampooed her hair twice before reaching for the bar of soap. Meg always smelled of lavender and Aidan
rolled the bar over in her hands making it lather and sniffed at the bar of
soap smiling. She thought as she let the
bar slide across her stomach that, "Today she would be the one smelling
like the delicate flower on the beach".
Slowly she led the bar in circles around her breasts letting the water
wash away the lather and leaving her skin feeling soft and smooth. Her guided the small bar down her thighs
washing over her calves and coming back up to gently lather between her legs,
before carefully shaving her legs and rinsing off. Turning off the water she reached for a towel
and found them both still wet and she knew that Meg had at least been there for
a few minutes this morning. She did her
best to dry her body off on what little of the ends of the towels that were not
damp before gathering everything up and depositing it all in the hamper, vowing
to do the laundry in the evening when it cooled off a bit. Standing before the mirror she swiped away
the steam that had collected there and ran a comb quickly through her hair before
she pulled it up in a tight ponytail and reached for the baby oil. She knew it is a bit old fashioned and she
would pay for the abuse to her skin when she was a little older but she loved
the way it felt against her skin. She
rubbed just a bit over her skin stealing glances at her naked body in the
mirror as she did. The boys might save
seats for blond haired Meg, she thought, but Aidan had gotten a little
attention in college too. She had two
boyfriends over the course of the four years and they had each enjoyed the
small curves of her hips and the way her breasts filled out their dress shirts
in the morning. She did love to wake up
early and fix them a nice breakfast on Saturday mornings and it just seemed
easy to grab a clean shirt from the closet.
She absently massaged in the last of the oil making her nipples harden
slightly as she remembered the musky smell of those clean white shirts and a
smile spread across her face. Once again
she caught her reflection in the mirror and it brought her back to
reality. Aidan grabbed the little blue
bikini, hanging on the rack and slipped it on.
She remembered how they had shopped for days before finding it. Meg had been so excited and promised it would
be perfect for the beach. As Aidan
passed through the bedroom, on her way to the kitchen, she snagged her old
familiar college T-shirt, which often substituted for a nightshirt. It was still lying on the end of the bed and she
threw it on, over her bikini. She walked
into the kitchen humming the old Beach Boys’ song, “Fun, Fun, Fun” but got
stuck on the chorus and could not remember the rest of the words. Seeing the pile of dishes in the sink she
guessed Meg had not come by alone and wondered how it was she had not woken
up. Aidan sighed, but a smile crept
across her face as she shook her head and picked up the bowl from the table
that was still half full of milk and had a few stray Cheerios still floating in
the white liquid, like little life preservers.
With the dishes rinsed and tucked into the dishwasher she went to the refrigerator
to see if there was anything left. She
located an apple and two peaches which would have to do for breakfast and
lunch. Once they were washed and wrapped
to keep them cool inside of her bag she headed out the door to the beach.
The
beach was only half a block away and as soon as the door was closed she could
smell the cool salt water calling to her.
There were little tourist boutiques lining all of the streets along the
beach. They sold everything from snow
cones to tourist T-shirts proclaiming, “My grandma and grandpa went to the
beach and all I got was this silly tee.”
There were little cafes with small tables lined up in front and bars
that seemed quiet during the day, but drew large crowds at night. Aidan meant to explore a couple of the nicer
bars in the evenings but going alone did not seem as much fun as going there
with Meg. At the very corner, right
across the street from the beach access was even an old LP record shop that had
bongo drums hanging from the awning out front.
She wondered if the shop had been there since the 1960s. The beach was busy but not as crowded as it
would get over the weekend and it was still just late morning so she found a
nice location on the beach and set up her towel. The sand was already getting warm and her
toes were burning from the walk over and getting everything set up so she
headed directly to the water’s edge to soak them in the cool surf. The roar of the waves filled her ears and she
watched each one roll in. The surfers,
lined up like toy soldiers standing sentry, were doing their best to find the
perfect wave but this morning they were small and they mostly stayed out away
from the beach. It was so hot and with
the small waves and the surfers all staying so far out she was sure it would be
safe to venture in a little deeper. She
gingerly stepped a little deeper, ever slowly creeping further into the water
until she had to hop a little for each wave as it rolled towards the
beach. She had gone a bit further than
she should and further than she ever had before but the water made her feel so
alive and like a little kid again. She
had been out longer than she intended and turned to check on her bag still back
on the beach when an unusually large wave caught her from behind spinning her
over. He head was pulled under water and
she was being tossed about like she had been thrown into a washing
machine. She could not find the
surface. She was not even sure if she
was right side up or upside down. The waves
seemed to be crashing in on her as they tossed her over and over. She fought frantically clawing for the
surface, for a gasp of air. Her lungs
burned but all she could see were bubbles and green everywhere. Surely, she thought, someone had to see her
go under. Someone would pull her free,
but slowly the water faded to black.
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Even
before she opened her eyes Aidan heard voices.
They were all around her. She
could feel the wet sand against her cheek and lips. The gentle surf washed against her
ankles. Slowly opening her eyes and
pushing up on one hand just to roll her aching body over took all the effort
she could muster. She moaned and closed
her eyes against the brilliant sun threatening to blind her.
Aidan
heard a woman ask, “Is she alive?”
The
voice of a small boy very near her face said, “Look mommy she moved and her
eyes are opening.” She felt a finger
that slowly slid down her arm, the fingernail gently skimming the surface of
her skin and as she slowly opened her eyes she saw the small boy put the finger
in his mouth, licking at the nail bed, before making a face and trying to spit
out the foul flavor which must have been from the baby oil she had put on
before coming to the beach.
The
mother gasped and grabbed the small boy by the arm pulling him away from the
crowd, indignantly scolding him, “Mason!
You can not just go around licking people that you do not know!” Trailing off as she stormed up the beach with
her son in tow Aidan could hear her complain, “Someone really should do
something about these girls on the beach”
An
elderly woman to her right said, “Wyatt, do something about this.”
Suddenly
there were hands lifting her to a sitting position. Then came the sting to her face. The elderly man, Wyatt, had just slapped her
gently, but not softly, on the cheek and was looking at her with concern
asking, “Are you alright?”
Aidan
looked up at him puzzled answering, “I think so,” as her hand rose to rub the
sore cheek, sure that it had left a mark.
The
elderly woman was smoothing Aiden’s ponytail back away from her face and
inquiring, “Did you do this on purpose or have you just arrived? Where do you live?”
By
this time Aidan was on her feet and brushing away a bit of loose sand from her
hands, “No, no, I just slipped and I am just staying…” as she raised her hand
to point in the direction of the beach house she noticed the shops looked
different and the record store was not there.
On this corner stood and old style corner market with fruit displayed in
boxes lining the front of the store.
Confused she stammered, “I… I… um,” looking up and down the beach front
for something familiar. As she struggles
to figure out how far she is from the beach house the crowd begins to disperse,
many of them shaking their heads, some looking back at her with pity in their
eyes but most focused on their feet as they trundle through the deep sand back
to their own activities. “Wait!” she
frantically calls out to them but not even the elderly couple will look back to
help.
Searching
for any marker along the shore that looks familiar she sees a jogger coming
towards her, but before she can utter a word he alters his path and jogs behind
her. As he races past behind her he
slaps her firmly on the derrière, so hard he nearly knocks her over again. She instantly grabs her behind and rubs the
burning sensation, looking towards the man who is still jogging down the beach
but is now running backwards smiling and shaking his finger at her. She is not sure why but she blushes and
returns his infectious smile.
To
her left is a group of young men, about her age, laughing loudly and passing a
football back and forth. Still feeling a
little dazed she approaches them and calls out quietly, “Excuse me, can you
help me?”
The
man with the ball plants it firmly on his left hip holding it casually in place
with his wrist and he smiles as he strides over to her. He is tall and tanned, with dark hair and
eyes the color of dark chocolate. It is
obvious he has spent some time on the beach.
She had not noticed how attractive he was until he smiled at her. The muscles of his arms are not the sort you
see on men who spend too much time worrying about how they look, but they are
the kind a man who is very athletic would have.
Her eyes are drawn to the strong muscles of his chest. There is just a touch of dark hair in the
center and a matching bit just below his belly as it slides down into his
bathing suit. His three friends approach
behind him. They are equally
athletically built, with varying hair and eye color, but each one as attractive
as the man with the football. Her breath
catches in her throat as they approach.
She blushes and drops her eyes to their feet as she sees she has been
caught admiring their physiques. The man
with the football reaches her first and in a deep voice says, “Sure, what kind
of help do you need?” simultaneously his free hand comes up and softly cups the
underside of her breast.
Aidan’s
hand instinctively jerks up to push it away as she takes a step back losing her
balance in the soft sand and landing in the waiting arms of the tallest of the
quartette; the blond with the deep blue eyes.
She had not notice him circle around behind her. He stands her up and with her back still held
tightly against his strong chest he whispers in her ear, “Naughty, naughty you
little spitfire and what are you doing down here all alone?” as he deftly spins
her quickly around and holds her torso against his waist pinning her there,
bent at the middle, with his arm firmly holding her in place. Quickly her feet are kicked apart and three
swift ‘whacks” land hard on her bottom.
The first one makes her cry out in surprise, it lands hard and the hand
is large, nearly covering both sides in one strike. The second one comes before she can catch her
breath and she tries to squirm away from it so it lands on one side sending a
sharp sting followed by a warm heat that spreads slowly over the skin. It is now that she raises her face to the
crowd realizing that all eyes on the beach are turned towards her. Many of the men have stopped building sand
castles with their children and are standing with their arms crossed nodding
their approval at the young men scolding her now. The women are smiling and trying to distract
the younger of the children away from the scene at the shore. The third strike is the hardest of all and
her knees buckle as tears form in the corners of her eyes. Aiden is panting as she is righted, the blond
still holding her in place with a big strong hand on each of her upper arms as he
slowly whispers in her ear, “What do you say to the nice man?”
Aiden’s
mouth gapes open, dumbfounded. Her mind
is racing trying to make sense of what is happening to her and where she
is. Her mouth pops open and closed so
that she looks like one of the guppies in the pet shop that stood on Main
Street, of her hometown when she was a young girl.
The
tall dark haired man just laughs and waves the blond off, “Danny, it’s
okay. Don’t worry about it. We are just here to have a little fun. Hell, we didn’t even ask her permission
first.”
The
blond, Danny, relaxes his hold on her arms and turns her around to face
him. With his thumb he gently reaches up
and swipes away a tear from her cheek and asks quietly “Are you okay now? Feel better?”
Aidan
could do nothing but bob her head forward slightly.
Danny
cocks his head and brings his hand up to cup his ear saying, “What? I did not hear that.”
Aidan
is able to gulp out a squeaky, “Yes.”
Danny
does not let go of his grip, in fact, it tightens slightly as he corrects her
saying, “Sir….”
Aidan’s
mouth falls open in shock and her eye are as wide open as a child who has just
had their lollipop ripped from their hand.
In barely more than a whisper she manages to choke out, “Yes, Sir?”
Danny’s
face lights up in a bright beaming smile as he pats her on the bottom releasing
her arms saying, “See that is a good little spitfire.” The tall dark haired man and his two friends
have already gone back to their patch on the sand and Danny follows behind
them.
As
Aidan looks along the beach all faces are on her. “Excuse me.
Could someone please…” but before she can finish her sentence they have
all gone back to what they were doing before and are too preoccupied to offer
her any assistance.
Unsure
of where she is and completely baffled by the behavior of the people on the
sand she turns to search for her towel and bag, but not before looking over her
shoulder to be sure the four men are focused on their football game and that
she is heading away from them. As she is
glancing at them the tall blond catches her and give her a wink as a gleaming
smile spreads across his face. She
quickly turns her gaze forward feeling the blush rising in her cheeks. Aidan raises a hand and touches her cheeks
feeling the heat and wipes away the wetness of the remaining tears wishing she
did not blush so easily. She then feels
the heat on her bottom and thinks those cheeks must have a bright pink blush as
well and rubs at the heat, tugging to reposition her bikini into place as she
searches for her towel. The beach
stretches on as far as she can see.
Ahead
of her she can see the light blue, sloped-roof of a life guard tower and begins
working her way towards it. As she draws
closer to it she can see that it is very much like a life guard tower you would
see on any beach. It is a simple wooden
structure with windows on three sides, a door in the front, with a ramp leading
up to it, and a deck that runs along the side facing the shore, where the life
guard can stand under the over-hang that provides a little shade during the
heat of the day. The entire building is
supported by wooden pillars which keep it up off the ground so the life guard
can see out over the crowds. It all
looks about as cliché as her bathroom back at the beach house, except at the
base of the tower where the four pillars support the small room there is iron
meshing on all four sides and a small opening where a metal gate hangs askew from
one hinge. Around the outside of the
tower are small wooden posts that stand about as tall as her waist. The posts surround the life guard tower and
stand about 1 meter apart from each other and are about 1 meter from the base
of the light blue tower so that they form a little square of twenty-one posts. Each post is topped with a black iron ring and
there is a man using a heavy grinder on some of the rings that appear to have
begun to rust. As she approaches he
stops his work and grins up at her with his toothless smile. She takes a step back, but as he chuckles and
returns to his work she presses forward to the young man positioned on the
front deck of the tower. At the base of
the ramp leading up to the deck she calls out to the life guard who looks down
at her and smiles as he turns and goes back inside the small room. Hesitantly, she climbs the ramp calling out, “Hello?”
to the life guard as she does. Reaching
the top she peers through the doorway and he is sitting on a small stool at a
table that is stacked with first aid equipment.
Aidan smiles and breathes a sigh of relief and quietly asks, “Excuse me
but could you please help me. I seem to
be lost.”
The
life guard smiles and motions for her to enter the small room. Once inside there is barely enough room for
the two of them with the life guard sitting on the stool. He looks up at her and says, “Won’t your
please have a seat?” Aidan quickly looks
around but the life guard is sitting on the only seat in the room. He has leaned forward with one hand on his right
knee and the left knee he has his elbow propped up with his palm facing up
slowly extending out in her direction.
She is still looking from her right where the orange lifebuoy hangs on a
nail and to the left where a small refrigerator sits in the corner when she
feels his fingertips press softly against her knees. Startled she looks down at his hand and tries
to back up, but her back is against the door, and as she does her legs open
slightly allowing his hand to gently slide between her knees. Her mouth falls open in silent protest as she
looks from the hand up into the man’s face.
His gentle blue eyes are looking up sideways at her waiting, when he
clears his throat and impatiently asks, “Well?”
Quickly
looking around the room again Aidan chuckles softly and says quietly, “I do not
see a chair.”
“I
have offered you my hand. Now please
bend your knees outward and kindly have a seat like a polite young lady would
when a seat is offered to her,” he softly chided her. Whether it was the heat of the day, nearly
drowning, or the strange way that people were behaving she found herself slowly
bending her knees and lowering herself down just as she had been asked to do. Once she was awkwardly balanced on his
outstretched hand, just the thin layer of her bikini between his warm flesh and
the moisture that was barely hidden away in the folds of her own he leaned
close to her face, still smiling and asked, “What is it you need help with
again?”
Flustered
and blushing Aidan stumbled over her words quickly trying to get her story
out. Trying to explain that she had
nearly drown and she was lost and could not find her way back, but her words
just fell out in a frantic jumble. The
life guard just smiled at her, obviously amused, looking her directly in the
eye, holding her gaze as his outstretched hand began to slowly close over her
mons bringing his other hand up to cover her mouth and let out a deep low, “Shhh.” Immediately, she stopped talking and took in
a deep breath of air and let it out slowly finally feeling her body relax as a
tingling began to radiate up from her belly.
She knew that she should not, but his strong hand felt good against her
body and she dared not move, but instinctively kissed his hand that was still
holding her silent. Gradually, the hand
that was grasping her releases and the life guard tells her to stand and she
silently obeys his command. He stands up,
as she does, and smiles down at her, “Now then, we are closed today as you can
see from the repairs going on outside,” there is a quick slap on her rear as he
continues, “so now off with you young lady.”
Bewildered she slowly inches back down the ramp looking over her
shoulder as the life guard shoos her away with the back of open fingertips that
where only a few moments ago wrapped so snuggly around her.
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