lousy attempt to make some progress today. I think I will have to re write this whole section. Also anyone who recognizes themselves in these stories it is not pure coinsidence. If I used your name I liked it. If there is a mannerism you have that I used it might also be that I liked it or I just needed the idea. It is in no way a judgement of the action in a good or bad way. It just fits where I add it in.
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Still
struggling to make sense of all that had happened; Aidan looks around searching
the sand for her towel and belongings.
Her stomach rumbles and she instantly brings one hand up to stop the noise
and the other up to shade her eyes from the sun as she searches the sky to
determine how long she had been here and in the water. She guesses that it was getting late in the
day, but she was not prepared to trust any of her senses. She wished she had eaten something before
getting into the water this morning. She
knew in the heat of the day she could not go much further either as her mouth
was feeling very dry. As she scans the
beach trying to determine which way to go, she looks back to where the elderly
couple, the families, and the young men were gathered on the beach and decides
not to go back that way. She looks to
the life guard tower she just left and while that was enthralling and mildly
confusing as to why it affected her so much, she can not return there for
help. Far off in the distance she see a
pier with what looks like a considerable amount of activity.
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